Tickled brains that explode
Into particles of cotton
Like floating feathers,
Flung into the air
To be disposed into a basin
Of cool, crisp fluid,
Dissolving like snow
On a burning spiral
Triggered by a petal
Of a rose, withering
Into a single hair
Tied to a robin's ankle,
Flashing red lights
Across the blue &
Over the reflections,
Streaming at all angles,
And molding into
A pair of eyes
Stretched open
To consume
Everything
At once.
this is pretty beast debs. "Tickled brains that explode" pulled me in right away. how you move from place to place is pretty awesome i must say.
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thanks!!! :D
ReplyDeletewill definitely check out them guys. hahah